Revisions, revisions

So when I presented my personal coat of arms in my design class my professor suggested that it might need some revision. That's professor speak for "this is crap."  His actual words were "Where's the kitchen sink? You've got everything else." Point taken and first lesson of design noted: My first anything stinks. Also, less is more. So, if you're curious, here's revision number 4.

It's still a work in progress (the banner is only a place holder as is the typographic samples on the sketchbook, also I'm not sure about the compass), however it's due next class. Next lesson of design: I don't work fast enough.